375. He could not think without a way to write down his thought. He wrote "I need you"; he meant "I need to be loved". Just as quickly it was crossed out. One good sentence is more difficult to write then a host of paragraphs; fewer words do not come easier. He is searching for a particular word; It is a way of saying, I want you, too, to have this experience, so that we are more alike, so that we are closer, bound together, sharing a point of view--so that we are "coming from the same place." It will be a while before he finds it.

2 Comments:
I'm impressed how you make the bits work together. Well done!
Thankyou very much, some of the posts are working really well aren't they? The quality of the posts will always reflect the quality of the writing of its contributors but be tempered by how much time/care I have been able to put into the collating.
Keep talking,
Rachel.
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